Review of Literacty Narritive

I would change a lot to my paper. I mean I thought it was a very well prepared and written paper. It was very organize, but I wish I could have gave the reader more of an imagination wonder. I really did not put enough effort as I wanted because I really did not know what to say in my narrative. I would had taken my time on it a lot more and put more into it.  I would had made it a lot longer with a lot more words. I would had talked more about my life and how I learned how to read and write. I would had used more advanced vocabulary to get me to sound more of a professional write, so it would look like a legit paper. I also would had told the story about the time when I was learning big vocabulary words and we had to write a huge paper and we had to use every single one of them. It was not fun at all cause I barely knew what they meant so I really did not know where to correctly used them at.  I would have defiantly gotten the readers interest more. I do not know how I would, but I would have. I also would have been organized with my paper. I felt like it was all nasty as in It wasn’t very well organized. I do not know how to explain it. I also would have been more into it. I would have made it a lot more interesting then it was.